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Post by Turntable @ Tue Feb 20, 2018 12:07 pm

Loved that Deuts. nice twist.
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Post by Deuteronomy @ Tue Feb 20, 2018 12:09 pm

Thanks Broseph.

You do one too.
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Post by Deuteronomy @ Tue Feb 20, 2018 3:22 pm

Nice S1K, intriguing!
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Post by S1K @ Tue Feb 20, 2018 3:29 pm

Thanks Deuts. I liked the end of your story.
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Post by Deuteronomy @ Tue Feb 20, 2018 4:40 pm

:D Good build up TT, I wanted to know more
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Post by Damien Thorn @ Tue Feb 20, 2018 7:05 pm

Gloomy, Dirk. Quite the class warrior.
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Post by Pigeon @ Tue Feb 20, 2018 11:33 pm

I made sure to write mine before I read anyone else's. TT, you cnut :D
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Re: FF-Rail Travel Chat

Post by span @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 7:13 am

These are all excellent - well done everyone!!
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Post by Dirk @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 8:01 am

Damien Thorn wrote:Gloomy, Dirk. Quite the class warrior.

Gloomy definitely, but no class warrior I. My protagonist is no upper class throwback, but a jumped-up oik with no concept of noblesse oblige. I suspect he'd feel at home on PH
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Post by Damien Thorn @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 8:16 am

Love that, Pigeon!
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Post by Turntable @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:20 pm

Very good indeed MFD.
Pigeon, I was very impressed. I don't remember you ever doing one before?
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Post by Deuteronomy @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:28 pm

Turntable wrote:Very good indeed MFD.
Pigeon, I was very impressed. I don't remember you ever doing one before?


Agreed on both counts.

Shall we say last entries by Monday and we'll do a poll then?
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Post by Turntable @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:36 pm

Yes
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Post by Deuteronomy @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:37 pm

Turntable wrote:Yes


Good.
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Post by span @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:41 pm

Deuteronomy wrote:
Turntable wrote:Very good indeed MFD.
Pigeon, I was very impressed. I don't remember you ever doing one before?


Agreed on both counts.

Agreed, too!

ManFro that was really great.

And Pidge, blimey! I really enjoyed it and read it twice.

Actually all of these just impress me. The people who do them all the time and are always great, and the people who do the occasional one and their greatness surprises me.
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Re: FF-Rail Travel Chat

Post by Deuteronomy @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:42 pm

span wrote:
Deuteronomy wrote:
Turntable wrote:Very good indeed MFD.
Pigeon, I was very impressed. I don't remember you ever doing one before?


Agreed on both counts.

Agreed, too!

ManFro that was really great.

And Pidge, blimey! I really enjoyed it and read it twice.

Actually all of these just impress me. The people who do them all the time and are always great, and the people who do the occasional one and their greatness surprises me.


Why don't you do one Span? Go on, have a go!

>narrows eyes<

Do. One.
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Post by span @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:50 pm

I'm trying but I'll probably delete it in a huff and then won't speak to any of you for a bit. You'll know what you've done.
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Post by Deuteronomy @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:53 pm

span wrote:I'm trying but I'll probably delete it in a huff and then won't speak to any of you for a bit. You'll know what you've done.


Nope, I won't have a clue - I'll know that you're cross though and that I should probably apologise.
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Post by Strawman @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 2:29 pm

Nice use of a lager prop there span.
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Post by manfromdelmonte @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 2:47 pm

Nice one Span. Enjoyed that.
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Re: FF-Rail Travel Chat

Post by Deuteronomy @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 2:54 pm

They are all good so far.
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Post by Dirk @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 3:14 pm

span wrote:I'm trying but I'll probably delete it in a huff and then won't speak to any of you for a bit. You'll know what you've done.

Don't worry. I'm shit at it and almost never win. Even when certain members admitted I had brought moisture to their eyes I didn't win.

Not that I'm bitter
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Post by Dirk @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 3:16 pm

Just caught up. I love yours Span
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Post by S1K @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 3:20 pm

Really enjoying this and I've enjoyed reading everyone else's stories in different ways.
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Post by Deuteronomy @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 5:04 pm

Well, I think we can all agree that this FF has been a fcuking triumph so far.
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Re: FF-Rail Travel Chat

Post by Pigeon @ Wed Feb 21, 2018 6:46 pm

span wrote:
Deuteronomy wrote:
Turntable wrote:Very good indeed MFD.
Pigeon, I was very impressed. I don't remember you ever doing one before?


Agreed on both counts.


Agreed, too!

ManFro that was really great.

And Pidge, blimey! I really enjoyed it and read it twice.

Actually all of these just impress me. The people who do them all the time and are always great, and the people who do the occasional one and their greatness surprises me.


Gosh, ta, dudes and dudette :blush:

No, I never did do one before, but having recently had a nasty temperature which set delirious and incoherent thoughts about the railway history of South Yorkshire spinning round and round my head, it more or less wrote itself when I saw the suggested subject :)
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Re: FF-Rail Travel Chat

Post by span @ Thu Feb 22, 2018 12:40 pm

Dirk wrote:Just caught up. I love yours Span

Thanks, Dirk! I really loved yours too. The dying bit in particular which seemed like a difficult thing to write, written very well.

Pigeon wrote:
No, I never did do one before, but having recently had a nasty temperature which set delirious and incoherent thoughts about the railway history of South Yorkshire spinning round and round my head, it more or less wrote itself when I saw the suggested subject :)

:D
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Post by S1K @ Mon Feb 26, 2018 10:27 am

Are we judging this today?
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Post by Disastrous @ Mon Feb 26, 2018 12:11 pm

I didn’t want to read anyone else’s before doing mine but have now - well done everyone!

Glad to see this back again. Good.

Really like your one strawms.
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Post by Strawman @ Mon Feb 26, 2018 12:21 pm

Thanks Dis, much appreciated.
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